Recent Comments

MKThirtyLicks
9/7/18, 12:13 AM
i want to go in that cave....mmmm
Daniel
9/7/18, 12:09 AM
love it, Love It, LOVE IT !!! Dude this pushed my 'hotboy'buttons HARD!! Please follow this up with a.....Family Reunion back at the Space Station...please? I.J.S.KIUT
Daniel
9/6/18, 11:45 PM
SYFY erotica is so f*****g hot ! The subversive corruption is a real fetish of mine and you write it in a very colorful, descriptive manner that I find charming and sexually stimulating....not an easy combination to achieve, CONGRATS DUDE...I.J.S.UT
itsuwarik.
9/6/18, 11:38 PM
I am very happy and satisfied with the end of Mark and Nick. For a moment I thought Tom would become the alpha male ... Thank God that this is not true. At least not in the sense that his brothers in the fraternity fell into submission. I almost believed that everything would revolve around him. So I really liked that you left Mark and Nick out of that. Welcome be the romance.
the same woman who commented on the last one
9/6/18, 10:54 PM
And you outdid yourself again. This series is the best I've read to date. You execute this concept so well!
itsuwarik.
9/6/18, 10:20 PM
I'm sorry, it would be hard to say that I like it. I do not like Tom very much, and it seems that Mark apart from passive will end up being submissive. I do not know what to think about it. It is hot? Yes. I like this? I do not.
Anonymous
9/6/18, 10:16 PM
if you keep going, and i hope you do, stay in firs person. even if swap out between characters. the 3rd person POV stood out.
9/6/18, 9:37 PM
Hey, thanks! I agree, I could totally improve on writing induction scenes. I usually prefer a faster method, but induction can be super hot too. Thanks for the feedback!
Daniel
9/6/18, 9:07 PM
Waiting to see how this plays out I.J.S.
Anonymous
9/6/18, 2:53 PM
you're getting good at writing the induction part of hypnosis, MST. and the feet kink is hot as always. nice job!