Recent Comments

itsuwarik.
9/7/18, 12:29 PM
I do not know what to think about it. Poor Em. I would even have preferred to have his memory erased or something like that.
itsuwarik.
9/7/18, 10:58 AM
I understand it perfectly. It is not necessary to announce "flashback" or something like that. Only that it is understood that it is something that happens in the past, and to whom it refers. Of course it can be improved.
MKThirtyLicks
9/7/18, 12:13 AM
i want to go in that cave....mmmm
Daniel
9/7/18, 12:09 AM
love it, Love It, LOVE IT !!! Dude this pushed my 'hotboy'buttons HARD!! Please follow this up with a.....Family Reunion back at the Space Station...please? I.J.S.KIUT
Daniel
9/6/18, 11:45 PM
SYFY erotica is so f*****g hot ! The subversive corruption is a real fetish of mine and you write it in a very colorful, descriptive manner that I find charming and sexually stimulating....not an easy combination to achieve, CONGRATS DUDE...I.J.S.UT
itsuwarik.
9/6/18, 11:38 PM
I am very happy and satisfied with the end of Mark and Nick. For a moment I thought Tom would become the alpha male ... Thank God that this is not true. At least not in the sense that his brothers in the fraternity fell into submission. I almost believed that everything would revolve around him. So I really liked that you left Mark and Nick out of that. Welcome be the romance.
the same woman who commented on the last one
9/6/18, 10:54 PM
And you outdid yourself again. This series is the best I've read to date. You execute this concept so well!
itsuwarik.
9/6/18, 10:20 PM
I'm sorry, it would be hard to say that I like it. I do not like Tom very much, and it seems that Mark apart from passive will end up being submissive. I do not know what to think about it. It is hot? Yes. I like this? I do not.
Anonymous
9/6/18, 10:16 PM
if you keep going, and i hope you do, stay in firs person. even if swap out between characters. the 3rd person POV stood out.
9/6/18, 9:37 PM
Hey, thanks! I agree, I could totally improve on writing induction scenes. I usually prefer a faster method, but induction can be super hot too. Thanks for the feedback!