Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/6/18, 3:48 AM
As usual, a great beginning to what will be for sure a great series. Love the fluid writing style. Can't wait for next installment.
Anonymous
9/6/18, 2:41 AM
I don't mind the journal but the part the POV shift to Pete was jarring.
Anonymous
9/6/18, 2:20 AM
im with the other commenter above. im not a huge fan of the joirnal entry format. it makes me feel like im reading a document instead of an actual fantasy story
Anonymous
9/6/18, 2:01 AM
Brainwashed boys in underwear, my eternal theme. The start of another great story.
Daniel
9/6/18, 1:06 AM
You dudes are amazing ! The description of the draining was so creative and sooo hot! DO IT AGAIN GENTLEMEN...FEED ME SEYMORE I.J.S.
Daniel
9/6/18, 12:41 AM
Really nice stuff- a bit more struggling or attack on authority figures ( cops? ) would have been HOT ! Good job dude I.J.S.
Daniel
9/6/18, 12:25 AM
Just about perfect! I realize you didn't feel the need for another transformation due to the length of the story or fear of repetition, but your first attack was so terrific, I was hoping to read one more- next time dude? I.J.S.
Daniel
9/6/18, 12:06 AM
Really LOVE SYFY Erotica...the 'draining.' sequence was described in a very detailed super sexy way...DUDE more please I.J.S.
Daniel
9/5/18, 11:31 PM
brought back so many hot sexy fun days in the dorm thanks dude I.J.S.
Daniel
9/5/18, 11:08 PM
AS a lifelong weed - head, this story has extra special resonance for me, thanks dude ! I? J? S