Recent Comments

Daniel
9/6/18, 1:06 AM
You dudes are amazing ! The description of the draining was so creative and sooo hot! DO IT AGAIN GENTLEMEN...FEED ME SEYMORE I.J.S.
Daniel
9/6/18, 12:41 AM
Really nice stuff- a bit more struggling or attack on authority figures ( cops? ) would have been HOT ! Good job dude I.J.S.
Daniel
9/6/18, 12:25 AM
Just about perfect! I realize you didn't feel the need for another transformation due to the length of the story or fear of repetition, but your first attack was so terrific, I was hoping to read one more- next time dude? I.J.S.
Daniel
9/6/18, 12:06 AM
Really LOVE SYFY Erotica...the 'draining.' sequence was described in a very detailed super sexy way...DUDE more please I.J.S.
Daniel
9/5/18, 11:31 PM
brought back so many hot sexy fun days in the dorm thanks dude I.J.S.
Daniel
9/5/18, 11:08 PM
AS a lifelong weed - head, this story has extra special resonance for me, thanks dude ! I? J? S
LongtimeFan
9/5/18, 10:09 PM
AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! This is INCREDIBLE! Not only is it a super-sexy story with a ton of potential (brainwashing! People becoming muscular lookalike drones! The slow transformation!), it also brings back the journal format of my favorite story of yours: "Musclehead: Tyler's Journal." You have such an amazing knack for writing characters' gradual brainwashing, so getting to watch it "play out" via journal entries ALWAYS gets me going. Three cheers for Hypnothrill, the sexiest author of all! :)
Anonymous
9/5/18, 7:50 PM
I like the story, but I think you should drop the journal framing device. The main character just ends up knowing way more than they should (like how Peter has to listen to this song the second they get up), especially if the brainwashed are forming their own closed-circle group.
Daniel
9/5/18, 5:49 PM
Really terrific , you should be as proud as Dr Benjamin Bommer I.J.SY
Anonymous
9/5/18, 5:20 PM
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