Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/6/18, 2:41 AM
I don't mind the journal but the part the POV shift to Pete was jarring.
Anonymous
9/6/18, 2:20 AM
im with the other commenter above. im not a huge fan of the joirnal entry format. it makes me feel like im reading a document instead of an actual fantasy story
Anonymous
9/6/18, 2:01 AM
Brainwashed boys in underwear, my eternal theme. The start of another great story.
Daniel
9/6/18, 1:06 AM
You dudes are amazing ! The description of the draining was so creative and sooo hot! DO IT AGAIN GENTLEMEN...FEED ME SEYMORE I.J.S.
Daniel
9/6/18, 12:41 AM
Really nice stuff- a bit more struggling or attack on authority figures ( cops? ) would have been HOT ! Good job dude I.J.S.
Daniel
9/6/18, 12:25 AM
Just about perfect! I realize you didn't feel the need for another transformation due to the length of the story or fear of repetition, but your first attack was so terrific, I was hoping to read one more- next time dude? I.J.S.
Daniel
9/6/18, 12:06 AM
Really LOVE SYFY Erotica...the 'draining.' sequence was described in a very detailed super sexy way...DUDE more please I.J.S.
Daniel
9/5/18, 11:31 PM
brought back so many hot sexy fun days in the dorm thanks dude I.J.S.
Daniel
9/5/18, 11:08 PM
AS a lifelong weed - head, this story has extra special resonance for me, thanks dude ! I? J? S
LongtimeFan
9/5/18, 10:09 PM
AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! This is INCREDIBLE! Not only is it a super-sexy story with a ton of potential (brainwashing! People becoming muscular lookalike drones! The slow transformation!), it also brings back the journal format of my favorite story of yours: "Musclehead: Tyler's Journal." You have such an amazing knack for writing characters' gradual brainwashing, so getting to watch it "play out" via journal entries ALWAYS gets me going. Three cheers for Hypnothrill, the sexiest author of all! :)