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Anonymous
9/5/18, 4:14 PM
This is great! Assimilation paranoia stories are the best.
Anonymous
9/5/18, 3:30 PM
Wonderful! And hot!!! Love the hive mentality that is brewing as well as the uniform assimilation that is starting!! Another awesome start. Can't wait for the rest!!!
zerumolecolarum
9/5/18, 3:27 PM
Tank you guys! Trying to do my best here! I kinda got what you are saying about povs (even if i don't really know what they are :/), yet i written that by purpose, trying to move up the story a little. Next chapter I'll try to make things a lil more simple
Daniel
9/5/18, 3:26 PM
Just read this for the second time- dude, it was even sexier and pushed ALL of my buttons- you've gotta go get that baseball team....maybe some cops? THANKS MAN I.J.S.
9/5/18, 3:12 PM
Oh, you know I'm a sucker for underwear conformity stories -- and no one handles that theme like you! Looking forward to seeing where it goes.
9/5/18, 2:56 PM
I agree with you there! There's nothing worse than "Chapter 6: The Same Thing Happens to Another Guy" I initially "saw" Mikey's transformation taking much longer, but then I figured we all know what's going to happen so I might as well just get to it. (Which, long-winded as I am, is really saying something.) I also thought the scene between Bennett and Tino would be longer, as Tino discovered layer after layer of Bennett's plot. But again, we just didn't need it, so I significantly shortened the moment.
Daniel
9/5/18, 2:54 PM
DUDE- What can I say? You knocked this one out of the park- CONGRATS, MORE PLEASE ? I.J.S.
Daniel
9/5/18, 2:35 PM
LOVE SYFY EROTICA ! You're quite a master storyteller, very well written and great for a good wank I.J.S.
Cubwriter28
9/5/18, 2:24 PM
nycboot, youve inspired me to revisit this! got caught in writer's block but i am working on the sequel!!
9/5/18, 1:45 PM
Nope, I didn't feel it was too rushed. I think brevity is the soul of wit, especially when you're writing zombie stories, which can get repetitive fast.