Recent Comments

9/1/18, 6:04 PM
While the whole skater stuff was whatever the core theme of the story was hot. Especially the buttplay component. :)
TheD
9/1/18, 5:36 PM
I really want this story to continue for a few more chapters. It’s so much fun, and getting increasingly hotter.
9/1/18, 5:00 PM
I've been thinking for a while what to say about this story. I really like it. It's very creative, though it leaves me with a lot of questions I would like to see answered in a sequel. It's unusual for a cock transformation type story, usually that ends up with someone turned into a dildo; melding someone into the body of the transformer to enlarge their cock is really different. That said, 16" is kind of nuts. Dude sounded like he was 10-12" to begin with too so I don't understand why he needs so much length. Is his statuesque body the result of merging a lot of guys into him? Does it wear off, does he need a recharge? I did like that the story specified the cum from this augmented cock was going to grow the frat mates (dicks or muscles or both?). Is the transformer going to have to fuck his way through the whole frat? Since he seems to be able to assimilate his bottoms who would really want that though? The "moth to a flame" angle could be quite hot.
9/1/18, 4:20 PM
Thank you guys. I'm happy the things I was trying to express came through clearly. I don't have a sequel immediately planned but I do have some thoughts for a future continuation. I've been letting this story cook for quite a while and I reached the point where I had to set it down and make some decisions before I could figure out where else it might go.
LongtimeFan
9/1/18, 3:53 PM
AMAZING! This story was phenomenal in every way: a kind, thoughtful protagonist, a wish that didn’t immediately ruin people’s lives (clever and sweet!), an achingly hot muscle worship bit, and a sex scene so amazingly hot, so perfectly written, that I felt like I was right there (I almost always skip the sex scenes, but this was PERFECTION). Amazing job!
Anonymous
9/1/18, 3:53 PM
Oh this is good!
Anonymous
9/1/18, 3:27 PM
Won't there be any problems if he just got his dick inside a mouth that was previously filled with the robot's conversion nanites?
Anonymous
9/1/18, 3:01 PM
Oh, man, I love the intense reversal at the end of this...
Anonymous
9/1/18, 3:00 PM
“TAKE IT OFF NOW, C’MON GET IT BARE! TAKE IT OFF, DUDES! RIGHT NOW AND RIGHT HERE! TAKE IT OFF…”
Danny
9/1/18, 2:57 PM
I love that, whether he knows it or not, Jack's wish has made having sex with him more addictive than any drug ever could be...