Recent Comments

9/1/18, 3:17 AM
Well done. Keep on writing this. It's good
9/1/18, 3:17 AM
Yes, turn the dad into a cub for another bear the son meets.
9/1/18, 3:10 AM
All I can picture is the damn sexy robot from the Netflix Lost in Space XD.
9/1/18, 1:45 AM
Please continue!
Anonymous
8/31/18, 10:31 PM
I can't wait for more
Anonymous
8/31/18, 10:09 PM
cannt wait to see next
Anonymous
8/31/18, 9:33 PM
Nice intro
Anonymous
8/31/18, 9:24 PM
Excellent start. Hoping there are follow-ups!
Bimarguynj
8/31/18, 11:30 AM
As a short story it really want bad at all . I do agree it needs just a bit more in the control and transformation part. I would like to see this continue. Reach out to site and get help. On the typos otherwise great concept
zerumolecolarum
8/31/18, 8:53 AM
Thank you guys! As you got, English is not my language so... i might need some help to get the sequel more fluid and understandable :3