Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/31/18, 10:31 PM
I can't wait for more
Anonymous
8/31/18, 10:09 PM
cannt wait to see next
Anonymous
8/31/18, 9:33 PM
Nice intro
Anonymous
8/31/18, 9:24 PM
Excellent start. Hoping there are follow-ups!
Bimarguynj
8/31/18, 11:30 AM
As a short story it really want bad at all . I do agree it needs just a bit more in the control and transformation part. I would like to see this continue. Reach out to site and get help. On the typos otherwise great concept
zerumolecolarum
8/31/18, 8:53 AM
Thank you guys! As you got, English is not my language so... i might need some help to get the sequel more fluid and understandable :3
muscledrain
8/31/18, 6:35 AM
This was an amazing piece of work. I really enjoyed it. I really want more!
Anonymous
8/31/18, 6:15 AM
I hope that once Chris transformation is complete he will be the first of the party to be transformed it seems to me that his stuck up bible bashing father needs to join him and his priorities are changed as well, into his new religion that of trucking bears
8/31/18, 6:06 AM
I think this story has some merit so please carry on with it. it was a bit confusing (I take it that English is not your first language) but I carried on reading and like how it ended up. as Hypnothrill said it would be good to see the Biotomes turn on their captors and turn the whole base into the same creatures
ForgottenCradle
8/31/18, 4:15 AM
So glad to see it back and continuing. This chapter was great