Recent Comments

8/29/18, 7:54 PM
So glad to see this continuing!! Very well done!
8/29/18, 5:46 PM
yes I agree great start and I am looking forward to reading more
Anonymous
8/29/18, 3:22 PM
Great idea and hot story!
Anonymous
8/29/18, 2:29 PM
Yes please write more!
8/29/18, 5:31 AM
I think there's some really great parts in this, some nice descriptions, and frankly any time straight guys learn what they've missed out on by not having their holes played with, is always good. And the subconscious knowledge they should be advertising their arses with jockstraps in mesh shorts is a lesson a lot more guys should take to heart. I think one part that does trip things up is the use of tenses here, a lot of the story is written in present tense, but sometimes you slip into past tense. Personally I find present tense a little awkward to read, as it doesn't convey the flow of time as easily. So well done! I look forward to seeing what you come up with next.
Anonymous
8/29/18, 4:24 AM
Hey Rubbersome. Love your work so much. Was wondering if you have written a sequel to "A New Officer - Part 3: The New Officer's Supplier"? Love that story, so I hope there's more! Thanks!
Daniel
8/29/18, 1:51 AM
A bit dry, perfunctory...keep color, originality, FETISHES ...I.J.S.
Aug 19, 2018
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8/28/18, 11:43 PM
Nice. Not sure which of them is hunting which right now tho ;)
Anonymous
8/28/18, 11:12 PM
so hot
Clark
8/28/18, 9:37 PM
This is one of the best stories I've read on here in a while. Please continue!!