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Anonymous
8/29/18, 3:22 PM
Great idea and hot story!
Anonymous
8/29/18, 2:29 PM
Yes please write more!
8/29/18, 5:31 AM
I think there's some really great parts in this, some nice descriptions, and frankly any time straight guys learn what they've missed out on by not having their holes played with, is always good. And the subconscious knowledge they should be advertising their arses with jockstraps in mesh shorts is a lesson a lot more guys should take to heart. I think one part that does trip things up is the use of tenses here, a lot of the story is written in present tense, but sometimes you slip into past tense. Personally I find present tense a little awkward to read, as it doesn't convey the flow of time as easily. So well done! I look forward to seeing what you come up with next.
Anonymous
8/29/18, 4:24 AM
Hey Rubbersome. Love your work so much. Was wondering if you have written a sequel to "A New Officer - Part 3: The New Officer's Supplier"? Love that story, so I hope there's more! Thanks!
Daniel
8/29/18, 1:51 AM
A bit dry, perfunctory...keep color, originality, FETISHES ...I.J.S.
Aug 19, 2018
D
8/28/18, 11:43 PM
Nice. Not sure which of them is hunting which right now tho ;)
Anonymous
8/28/18, 11:12 PM
so hot
Clark
8/28/18, 9:37 PM
This is one of the best stories I've read on here in a while. Please continue!!
Anonymous
8/28/18, 8:25 PM
This is so hot ! Love the chubby short dicked slut. I'm so into chubby bears and that turned me on so much. Thanks for this. Please do more if you can. Like maybe see where they are using the coach and how . Thanks again <3
sweatnosis
8/28/18, 6:51 PM
The only thing in your tumblr looks like an ad; guess I missed it. Your story definitely left me wanting more. More overt transformation. Even just his daydreams while smoking and jacking - we don't even know if he was straight or gay at the beginning. Maybe his daydreams start with chicks, or a chick, quickly replaced by thoughts of guys. Maybe he starts feeling wild and free, things he associates with the way "he looked like some rocker out of the 1980s with these on" (personally I would have gone with greaser bikers, and had him suddenly wishing he had a crew like that... Then realizing "oh hey, frats are like that"! ;) Or have him think about how frat guys are so admired and get so many perks, it's almost like they rule campus... As the smoke and leather bring out his dominant side and he imagines people serving him. Even men. Yeah, men serving him... Him going around as part of this pack, ruling the campus... Or go the other way. Maybe he's seen the Alpha Sig president around, but as he smokes he realizes how attractive and awesome he is. He imagines the rest of the frat being these amazing guys. He'd do anything to join them, to get their approval. Then he imagines all of them surrounding him wearing full leather and has the most intense orgasm of his life. Obviously your story has inspired me. :) I love seeing leather and boots in a hypno story, and I love it even more if the story touches on how the leather makes the protagonist feel, how it changes him. Thanks!