Recent Comments

8/27/18, 7:48 PM
wow really enjoyed this chapter I can see the production line increasing - the bit I liked was when Douglas's Father was joining in esp stood next to the former cleaner. all are equal on the production line
Anonymous
8/27/18, 6:47 PM
unusual approach for this forum, but HOTT!
Anonymous
8/27/18, 6:43 PM
Wonderful chapter
Anonymous
8/27/18, 6:12 PM
Thanks for continuing this hot series, Hypnothrill. I would love to see where you take this next.
Apr 4, 2017
Daniel
8/27/18, 1:25 PM
Very detailed, well written, solid characters, brave, romantic....hot! The way it wrapped up got me a bit emotional, great job dude ! I. J. S.
Anonymous
8/27/18, 11:22 AM
Darn, still no update. :(
Aug 26, 2018
8/27/18, 8:01 AM
Hopefully when they remembered how gay they truly are, they also recalled how much they enjoy dressing like fags. Always fun seeing someone find a style that suits them so well. Really liked this one, well done.
Anonymous
8/27/18, 7:46 AM
I loved it, and I usually don't comment.
8/27/18, 5:35 AM
I made some edits to incorporate feedback and also to incorporate the new markdown formatting. More to come at some point, probably!
Anonymous
8/27/18, 4:33 AM
Really enjoying this, as much as your other stories. While I do want other hot men (like a squad of marines ^^) involved in this I do want it to keep going slowly. A lot of stories of this type start out small and then explode out of control to where there are too many characters to even have any distinction. Loving the slow progression on Steve too, not instantly a total slut but progressing through stages. Seems like I'm contradicting myself but if you wanted to introduce a group of men, do it slowly over several chapters focusing on describing a few each time. Multiple visits with small character trait changes and such, really adds to the excitement building instead of *poof* instant slave on man1, 2, etc. just my 2 cents, please continue with the excellent stories!