Recent Comments

8/27/18, 5:35 AM
I made some edits to incorporate feedback and also to incorporate the new markdown formatting. More to come at some point, probably!
Anonymous
8/27/18, 4:33 AM
Really enjoying this, as much as your other stories. While I do want other hot men (like a squad of marines ^^) involved in this I do want it to keep going slowly. A lot of stories of this type start out small and then explode out of control to where there are too many characters to even have any distinction. Loving the slow progression on Steve too, not instantly a total slut but progressing through stages. Seems like I'm contradicting myself but if you wanted to introduce a group of men, do it slowly over several chapters focusing on describing a few each time. Multiple visits with small character trait changes and such, really adds to the excitement building instead of *poof* instant slave on man1, 2, etc. just my 2 cents, please continue with the excellent stories!
DanIel
8/27/18, 3:08 AM
Ohhhh dude, YES! More Please.....I.J.S.
Daniel
8/27/18, 2:55 AM
The final'cum machine' paragraph was hot...things are starting to plateauI.J.S.
Daniel
8/27/18, 2:45 AM
Sooo good ! Are we going to see how all that cum is put to use? I.J.S.
Kyle
8/27/18, 1:12 AM
Great execution! Enjoyed this, didn't expect the tables turning and loved it.
Aug 25, 2018
Anonymous
8/26/18, 11:15 PM
Good beginning! I could see that you were translating from your native language, but I understood the dialogue fine. Thanks for writing the story!
Anonymous
8/26/18, 5:09 PM
I don't get the point to the last comment. Having said that, I didn't get the point to the story.
Anonymous
8/26/18, 5:07 PM
Funny!
Aug 26, 2018
Anonymous
8/26/18, 5:07 PM
The ending was a surprise. I didn't expect that. Great story!!