Recent Comments

Martin
8/25/18, 7:31 AM
Welcome! Quite opposite, I really like the idea that there are women who get excited by reading stories here. I'm sure that there are a few, but you're the first to "out" herself :)
Anonymous
8/25/18, 6:51 AM
Do me a favor: be a writer. Do it now - if you are not a writer already. Someone mentioned Black Mirror, and indeed, your story is THAT good. What a cathartic, shocking ending! Make a softer version, detail a bit more the secondary characters, turn it into a screenplay, get youself an agent and contact a producer asap.
Daniel
8/25/18, 6:28 AM
Cops & Hypno are my top fetish buttons, but as hard as I tried, I simply couldn't follow the narrative dude- sorry....I.J.S.
Daniel
8/25/18, 6:10 AM
Love Straight to gay corruption, LOVED the attack on Frank by Dan, loved the phoneticized spelling to help create colorful character, am hot for big ole bear daddy seduction. But unless I missed the metaphorical inference- the 'real' bear stuff destroyed it for me- sorry.....I.J.S.
cjunkins@gmail.com
8/25/18, 5:18 AM
Damn that was hot! I seriously hope another part to this comes out or at least something in the same path.
a woman
8/25/18, 5:00 AM
First of all, I hope it's cool with everyone that I go on this site. I really don't mean to intrude or anything. But just wanna say that from my perspective this is not at all sexist or chauvinistic. I'm the type who believes that women should be treated exactly the same way as men and nevertheless this sort of characatured world where both sexes are actually just different kinds of men is ridiculously hot. Bless
Daniel
8/25/18, 2:53 AM
Solid base narrative, looking forward to seeing where it goes...I.J.S.
Daniel
8/25/18, 2:36 AM
Some of these comments seem incredibly harsh and a bit misguided- this is erotica, the point isn't that you dropped an s, it's did your dick get hard, were your fetshes served...ahhh well. I thought your specific, colorful descriptions were hot ( I loved going up each other's piss slit to inject liquids internally- hot! ) If I had a caveat it would be that perhaps there was a bit too much sexual activity...perhaps. All in all I thought you created an unusual, sexy piece of erotica I.J.S.
Daniel
8/24/18, 11:01 PM
Good job dude...hot!! I. J.S.
mdlftr
8/24/18, 9:50 PM
Chilling! Sven creeps me out! Now I have to check out your other stories! Good writing, compelling story!