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8/25/18, 1:37 PM
Thanks Martin much appreciated I used my phone to add it. Couldn't embedd it into the text
Martin
8/25/18, 1:10 PM
Kane, I've edited your link to use "proper" markdown. I hope you don't mind.
Anonymous
8/25/18, 12:04 PM
Next chapter please <3
Anonymous
8/25/18, 9:59 AM
Hm, so the boy who cared about a pizza deliverman's feeling is now whoring his stepdad. As hot as the idea of son fucking father, this change of character is quite rapid, no guilt at all?
Kyle
8/25/18, 9:10 AM
Love this concept. Very much looking forward to other ways Kane's slave status asserts itself. Great work!
Martin
8/25/18, 7:31 AM
Welcome! Quite opposite, I really like the idea that there are women who get excited by reading stories here. I'm sure that there are a few, but you're the first to "out" herself :)
Anonymous
8/25/18, 6:51 AM
Do me a favor: be a writer. Do it now - if you are not a writer already. Someone mentioned Black Mirror, and indeed, your story is THAT good. What a cathartic, shocking ending! Make a softer version, detail a bit more the secondary characters, turn it into a screenplay, get youself an agent and contact a producer asap.
Daniel
8/25/18, 6:28 AM
Cops & Hypno are my top fetish buttons, but as hard as I tried, I simply couldn't follow the narrative dude- sorry....I.J.S.
Daniel
8/25/18, 6:10 AM
Love Straight to gay corruption, LOVED the attack on Frank by Dan, loved the phoneticized spelling to help create colorful character, am hot for big ole bear daddy seduction. But unless I missed the metaphorical inference- the 'real' bear stuff destroyed it for me- sorry.....I.J.S.
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8/25/18, 5:18 AM
Damn that was hot! I seriously hope another part to this comes out or at least something in the same path.