Recent Comments

Daniel
8/25/18, 6:10 AM
Love Straight to gay corruption, LOVED the attack on Frank by Dan, loved the phoneticized spelling to help create colorful character, am hot for big ole bear daddy seduction. But unless I missed the metaphorical inference- the 'real' bear stuff destroyed it for me- sorry.....I.J.S.
cjunkins@gmail.com
8/25/18, 5:18 AM
Damn that was hot! I seriously hope another part to this comes out or at least something in the same path.
a woman
8/25/18, 5:00 AM
First of all, I hope it's cool with everyone that I go on this site. I really don't mean to intrude or anything. But just wanna say that from my perspective this is not at all sexist or chauvinistic. I'm the type who believes that women should be treated exactly the same way as men and nevertheless this sort of characatured world where both sexes are actually just different kinds of men is ridiculously hot. Bless
Daniel
8/25/18, 2:53 AM
Solid base narrative, looking forward to seeing where it goes...I.J.S.
Daniel
8/25/18, 2:36 AM
Some of these comments seem incredibly harsh and a bit misguided- this is erotica, the point isn't that you dropped an s, it's did your dick get hard, were your fetshes served...ahhh well. I thought your specific, colorful descriptions were hot ( I loved going up each other's piss slit to inject liquids internally- hot! ) If I had a caveat it would be that perhaps there was a bit too much sexual activity...perhaps. All in all I thought you created an unusual, sexy piece of erotica I.J.S.
Daniel
8/24/18, 11:01 PM
Good job dude...hot!! I. J.S.
mdlftr
8/24/18, 9:50 PM
Chilling! Sven creeps me out! Now I have to check out your other stories! Good writing, compelling story!
Aug 19, 2018
mdlftr
8/24/18, 9:29 PM
I really like TRANSFORMATION stories - especially those where someone improves himself, becomes a better version of himself - smarter, more muscular, more self confident, happier, more willing to get out and actually LIVE life! This sounds promising. I like the narrator. He seems like he is focused on positive things for his subject - at least I'm inferring that he is! I look forward to future episodes! Thanks for writing!
8/24/18, 9:03 PM
i should have included URLs but I'm bad at promotion There's also one with a lot of strange female TFs to suit their horny crushes that ends in a bonanza of male TFs : https://www.thechangingmirror.com/phpbb/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=2794 Also 47 mostly gay caps live here: http://harvzilla.tumblr.com/tagged/hootiewho Not sure when i'll be back but hopefully that's enough to tide you fellas over
8/24/18, 7:59 PM
For anyone else who’s a fan of Melvillain and doesn’t mind stuff involving women: https://www.thechangingmirror.com/phpbb/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=5970&sid=2d97ce5480b12be57c1f9ccfd86bbd2a https://www.thechangingmirror.com/phpbb/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=4036&p=11237#p11151 https://www.thechangingmirror.com/phpbb/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=4862&p=13820#p13820