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8/24/18, 1:58 PM
Thanks for the comments! In my head, I kind of liked the idea of not knowing how much of Kyle's behaviour in the end was the bottle and how much was his choice BUT I see your point and I diiiiid post it to specifically a mental change site, haha :P More POV is always hot too, I agree
Anonymous
8/24/18, 1:55 PM
please more!
shadowlove176@yahoo.com
8/24/18, 12:57 PM
Also, if anyone has a story they want me to write, email the above email and we can discuss it. Always open to new ideas
shadowlove176@yahoo.com
8/24/18, 12:55 PM
Dont worry guys. This is a multi-part series. It will center around 4 "wishers". I 2 will for sure have at least 2 chapters. Little Zacky will have 3 chapters all to himself.
Anonymous
8/24/18, 11:24 AM
Looking forward for more. Would be interesting if, after a month, Kane gets his body back, but all the mental changes of being turned into a sub are permanent, and he has to pretend to be an alpha for the rest of his life, whilst secretly being Jamie's and/or Daniel's slave.
malskin23
8/24/18, 7:51 AM
Yes I agree I liked how the story flowed liked how Jimmy was changed accepting his new life. would have liked to have read more about Kyle and his new role, but saying that once he took a hit, his priorities changed
Anonymous
8/24/18, 7:02 AM
Extremely hot concept and executed well. I love a good "rescue gone wrong" story, as rare as they are on here. The mind control is nice and prominent, and the pacing is lockstep. The only thing I'd say for critique is that I wish there was anything shown with the mental shift; since Kyle is the POV character, we don't see what's inside Jimmy's head when he snorts the bottle, and the story cuts short when Kyle takes his. I also would've liked to see way more of Carlos dominating, but I'm biased since he's exactly my type. Cocky chubby doms are amazing. And it's always great to see some POC representation on this site, both dom and sub. Great job with this!
nerdy.suited.venom
8/24/18, 4:55 AM
I like very interesting
steve10185@hotmail.com
8/24/18, 4:16 AM
Tables turned stories make my head spin in ecstasy -- so intense that Dan gave an innocent command only to unleash his own fantasy against him. Wow. Please write more chapters or new stories!!!
Daniel
8/24/18, 4:04 AM
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