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malskin23
8/24/18, 7:51 AM
Yes I agree I liked how the story flowed liked how Jimmy was changed accepting his new life. would have liked to have read more about Kyle and his new role, but saying that once he took a hit, his priorities changed
Anonymous
8/24/18, 7:02 AM
Extremely hot concept and executed well. I love a good "rescue gone wrong" story, as rare as they are on here. The mind control is nice and prominent, and the pacing is lockstep. The only thing I'd say for critique is that I wish there was anything shown with the mental shift; since Kyle is the POV character, we don't see what's inside Jimmy's head when he snorts the bottle, and the story cuts short when Kyle takes his. I also would've liked to see way more of Carlos dominating, but I'm biased since he's exactly my type. Cocky chubby doms are amazing. And it's always great to see some POC representation on this site, both dom and sub. Great job with this!
nerdy.suited.venom
8/24/18, 4:55 AM
I like very interesting
steve10185@hotmail.com
8/24/18, 4:16 AM
Tables turned stories make my head spin in ecstasy -- so intense that Dan gave an innocent command only to unleash his own fantasy against him. Wow. Please write more chapters or new stories!!!
Daniel
8/24/18, 4:04 AM
Need to read eescription sf other in town attacks I. J. S
Anonymous
8/24/18, 3:13 AM
Get guys from the gym, the guys he trains and use them for the webcam. Hot studs fucking!!!
Daniel
8/24/18, 2:16 AM
The hat / mind control bit is sorta/ kinda hot. This would be a great recruitment, seduction story , thanks dude! I.J.S.
Daniel
8/24/18, 2:04 AM
Need specifics o Lil Bro hunting at the mall and elsewhere. Solid start dude I. J. S.
Anonymous
8/24/18, 1:58 AM
I honestly am not a huge fan of cock shrink, but I'm enjoying this so far. I'm interested to see how it goes. I think there should have been an extra stage to make him obedient. But this is good so far.
Daniel
8/24/18, 1:36 AM
Specifics on mmilking the night squad, make some of them hit the streets as cum collectors I. J. S.