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Aug 19, 2018
LongtimeFan
8/20/18, 8:37 AM
Hi! I absolutely LOVE your stories—I have since you were maxhockeyjock. You have a great gift for writing both supernatural stories (the one about James and Jake), plain-old revenge tales (the one with the guy who kidnaps his sister’s abuser and mentally breaks him), and then—my favorite—ones like this, that straddle the line between fantasy and realism. Is the narrator going to use magic, or simple hypnosis? Positive thinking, or transformative spells? I can’t wait to see! :)
LongtimeFan
8/20/18, 8:24 AM
Well done, Hypnothrill! Another good, sexy story. I will confess, though, that it was not one of my favorites by you—I think the addition of the wedding plot and my subsequent thoughts about poor Gemma kind of pulled me out of it? So stop being a good writer and creating emotional stakes. :p But seriously, the transformations into mindless muscleheads is on point as always, and your descriptions are the sexiest here. Keep it up! :)
Anonymous
8/20/18, 8:09 AM
Really enjoyed your series
Daniel
8/20/18, 8:07 AM
Great jOb dude! Tlrjyl someth.ing. syfy. Bikera & Cops vs alien iinvasion I.J.S
Daniel
8/20/18, 7:45 AM
NOW we're gettin sweaty muskyslippery steamy mind b.endingl mind controllin' DOWN & DIRTY GREAT STUFF DUUUDE, THANKS I. J. S.
Anonymous
8/20/18, 7:35 AM
This series was wonderful, and u wrote a perfect ending, really loved the whole thing.
Daniel
8/20/18, 7:10 AM
Hy.pno, cops,corruption, down & dirty that's theway uh huh uh huh. I like it....I.J.S.
Daniel
8/20/18, 6:52 AM
There are so many really hot ways this could go, do it up right dude! I.J.S.
Daniel
8/20/18, 5:53 AM
All the elements for a hot gay sex tale are there- you neehd to find a way to stop hav ing so much h.appeen witkh.out, detkailing it for your readers, as of now it's a bit white bread -c'mon hot young jocks, where's the shtruggling, the c orruption? I.J.S.
Anonymous
8/20/18, 5:47 AM
The surprise ending was definitely a surprise. My only, ONLY, complaint is that it seemed very sudden and a bit of a deus ex machina.