Recent Comments

Daniel
8/20/18, 7:10 AM
Hy.pno, cops,corruption, down & dirty that's theway uh huh uh huh. I like it....I.J.S.
Daniel
8/20/18, 6:52 AM
There are so many really hot ways this could go, do it up right dude! I.J.S.
Daniel
8/20/18, 5:53 AM
All the elements for a hot gay sex tale are there- you neehd to find a way to stop hav ing so much h.appeen witkh.out, detkailing it for your readers, as of now it's a bit white bread -c'mon hot young jocks, where's the shtruggling, the c orruption? I.J.S.
Anonymous
8/20/18, 5:47 AM
The surprise ending was definitely a surprise. My only, ONLY, complaint is that it seemed very sudden and a bit of a deus ex machina.
Daniel
8/20/18, 5:20 AM
Well alot of gay erotica are in place- now put 'em to down and dirty Use- go for it dude! I.J .S.
Dec 24, 2014
Daniel
8/20/18, 4:47 AM
I agree with nyjogger, it's been hot, now let's get that brother ( and perhaps rivalry whith the First ) involv ed I. J. S.
Anonymous
8/20/18, 4:36 AM
To be continued? Great story, and great conclusion!
Anonymous
8/20/18, 4:35 AM
I loved the conclusion. It is a nice wrap up to this chapter.
Aug 19, 2018
Anonymous
8/20/18, 4:28 AM
Great way to hook us in. What will happen next
Dnaniel
8/20/18, 3:54 AM
Getting better already! The addition and corruption of the two newbies was cool- just love that straight to gay hypno erotica dude, thanks I. J. S.