Recent Comments

Dec 24, 2014
Daniel
8/20/18, 4:47 AM
I agree with nyjogger, it's been hot, now let's get that brother ( and perhaps rivalry whith the First ) involv ed I. J. S.
Anonymous
8/20/18, 4:36 AM
To be continued? Great story, and great conclusion!
Anonymous
8/20/18, 4:35 AM
I loved the conclusion. It is a nice wrap up to this chapter.
Aug 19, 2018
Anonymous
8/20/18, 4:28 AM
Great way to hook us in. What will happen next
Dnaniel
8/20/18, 3:54 AM
Getting better already! The addition and corruption of the two newbies was cool- just love that straight to gay hypno erotica dude, thanks I. J. S.
Daniel
8/20/18, 3:41 AM
Hypno is my ,,# 1 fetish. This was solid work, but a bit perfunctary. Go for down and dirty, involve authority figures ( stopped by campus cops etc I.JS.
Daniel
8/20/18, 3:27 AM
Hypno is my buzz button fetish, so thanks! I love mind controlled hyno guys on tumblr - wish I could find more...these were good, but really 'short' stories Thanks for sharing dude I.J.S.
Daniel
8/20/18, 3:14 AM
Pretty hot. I wanted her to be sent out and seduce men, vines eating their cum...but this worked too. Very colorful, creative descriptions, it reminded me a bit of the 50s film THE WOMAN EATER, nice job dude I.J.S.
H
8/20/18, 3:05 AM
Feel validated. You're one of my favorite authors on the site and this doesn't disappoint
LongtimeFan
8/20/18, 2:53 AM
GASP! I was genuinely shocked by the surprise ending! The whole thing was so perfectly woven that it came out of nowhere, but it didn’t feel like a cheat, either (I’m going to go back and reread the whole thing to see if you dropped any clues along the way). And as ever, the descriptions of sex and mind control are smoking hot. You’re definitely among the best—Hooray! :D