Recent Comments

Martin
8/17/18, 6:00 PM
Hugh, you've just brought a very bright smile on my face. Coming from you, this means a lot to me. Now I don't have any choice but to write on - as if the other comments hadn't been motivation enough. About the formatting of the author's notes... If anyone is wondering, they're created quite easily with a single > sign at the paragraphs beginning. In Markdown, this is normally used for quoting a text you're responding to (like in a forum) and I thought it would look nice for this purpose.
8/17/18, 2:47 PM
Wow! Such a hot story! Drone type stories are not usually my thing, but this is done so well. The sex scenes are great and I love the first person perspective. I also love the formatting. The highlighting of the author’s notes as well as the heading are great. Nice work Martin! I’d love to read more.
Redbird
8/17/18, 1:18 PM
Wonderful story, it is well written. 10 out 10.
M
8/17/18, 6:12 AM
I can’t wait to see where this story goes. Keep on writing please!
Anonymous
8/17/18, 5:36 AM
Hott!!
Martin
8/17/18, 4:59 AM
Thanks to all of you for your comments! They’re more than welcome, and, as I’ve said, the fuel a writer needs to go on :) @PubScout: I totally understand your issue with the first-person perspective, because I’ve been fighting with this myself. The primary reason of course is, that I love to write the inner conflicts of a person from his own immediate point of view. I’ve tried other ways, but they don’t work well for me. At least not for these kind of stories. Just think of it - and I don't want to spoil the story’s end, if I ever manage to finish it - that at some point, Conny regains his memory of everything that happened. And he tells us his life’s story. That’s how I conceive it. And thanks agaion for your nice words :)
Anonymous
8/17/18, 3:53 AM
This was a great start! So many story lines to develop. Happy writing!!!
Shinjo_sho
8/17/18, 2:54 AM
Sound good =) I will checking it when I work with next work.
bleuboy
8/17/18, 2:48 AM
Hey Shinjo, if you want someone else to be a sounding board for your stories/help you edit them—there’s a whole thread dedicated to that in the site forums! It’s there if you’d like :)
8/17/18, 2:11 AM
I love all your stories! (Wish you'd finish the one about Jeremy in the woods...) Thank you so much for this. So simple, yet your description of Scott gradual transition is so nice.