Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/17/18, 3:53 AM
This was a great start! So many story lines to develop. Happy writing!!!
Shinjo_sho
8/17/18, 2:54 AM
Sound good =) I will checking it when I work with next work.
bleuboy
8/17/18, 2:48 AM
Hey Shinjo, if you want someone else to be a sounding board for your stories/help you edit them—there’s a whole thread dedicated to that in the site forums! It’s there if you’d like :)
8/17/18, 2:11 AM
I love all your stories! (Wish you'd finish the one about Jeremy in the woods...) Thank you so much for this. So simple, yet your description of Scott gradual transition is so nice.
8/17/18, 2:04 AM
Amazing sex scenes. Hot and sometimes funny. Narration is always an issue when writing. I had problems that Liberty was narrating the story. Many references to mind wiped, forgetfulness and unaware; yet he is telling the story being just the opposite of those things. Just my input. Great story and great series. Don't be concerned with your fantasies not being hot for someone else. That may be the case, but the ones who do share your fantasies will love your stories.
Oso Borique
8/17/18, 1:12 AM
Love the story including the feminization. The idea that all four were controlled, not much of a choice though it felt like a choice was really the game in control. Clearly, Ash's character shows the conflict more pronounce that he really didn't have a choice in the matter and the one who lost the most where the other three gained the most and we easily convince to accept the game's decision. It's that fear in which you want to give up control but realize the price might be too high and not what we had in mind. Awesome. Looking forward to your next story Good going.
Kane Swift
8/16/18, 9:35 PM
Awesome story. Loved it. Hope you write more
Aug 7, 2018
Slavethruhypn@yahoo.com
8/16/18, 8:09 PM
Oh tbe a hot man's total pig!
Mark
8/16/18, 3:50 PM
Best story I’ve read in ages!! Please, continue
Max
8/16/18, 3:26 PM
Very hot use of Tom of Finland imagery. Can't wait to see more!