Recent Comments

8/15/18, 2:29 PM
I should also add, and I'm not sure why I didn't, that many scebes in the story were super sexy to read through.
Anonymous
8/15/18, 1:44 PM
Fantastic story. I love how his mind is manipulated and switched off.
Shinjo_sho
8/15/18, 11:28 AM
Dear friend, Thank you for support and comment. Actually every comment is fine. I can understand the point of view form one who read and feel that is bad English. ^^; (I know my English is not as good as used to) I'm also enjoy that ppl who endure it and have a fun with it. I will try to do better next time. XD
Anonymous
8/15/18, 11:06 AM
This certainly does not deserve the first two comments. You're in need of some editting and a bit of work on some of the idioms, both of which is perfectly understandable. Tbh, I've seen far worse from people who are native english speakers. I hope the first two comments didn't scare you away, I'm hoping you'll writing a part 2 for this.
8/15/18, 8:39 AM
Thank you for the comments. I understand that trans isn't for everyone and it was a big risk to go down that path. Still, thank you for reading all the way up to the end, and I hope that you will read my future stories which I promise won't be such drastic changes to as many characters. I look forward to seeing your opinions on my work as I continue to strive for improvement of skill.
Anonymous
8/15/18, 6:55 AM
Great story, didn’t read te orinal one but will do now; this one is a great series I’m looking forward for the conclusion!
IvorySilk
8/15/18, 5:10 AM
Thanks for all the wonderful feedback everyone! I really appreciate and all of your inputs. So, just in response to the last two comments, I will state that while I will not be extending this particular story, you will see Ty again in future installments. Just like how you will see the Dr. from “No Escape” again. ;)
Anonymous
8/15/18, 4:42 AM
Great story! Wish it was longer!
Anonymous
8/15/18, 12:11 AM
Wish we could see Anthony loses but his failsafe helped both in the end. At least, hope to see a smart investigative journalist become a Buldges Boy, working for a great evil. After his failsafe worked, great to see whether each of them would see their victory truely victorious or miss intense pleasures : )
8/14/18, 10:09 PM
Im not a fan at all of the feminization. In fact it sort of ruined things.