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Aug 12, 2018
Anonymous
8/15/18, 5:50 PM
We need more like this!! This is my favorite story right now! You are a very talented author, the details are amazing and gets me off everytime!!
Max
8/15/18, 3:43 PM
Count me as wanting to see Anthony completely defeated, and him and Cameron transformed into dim witted muscle sluts eagerly serving as PR and PA boys. That said, I wouldn't mind some twists along the way. I think there is still so much that can be done with this concept, with Bulges having infiltrated so many places, and so easily able to not just transform men into Bulges Boys but also less obviously brainwash men like Eddie, Kevin and Jorge into loyal bosses. The conversion process seemed to work a lot quicker for Eddie too. Is there any limit to Bulges reach? Is there anything they haven't thought of that Anthony might have? That's the fun of this story. And however you end the next chapter, I kind of hope you leave an ending that's open for future variations on this concept. ;-)
Anonymous
8/15/18, 3:33 PM
Great story !!
8/15/18, 2:29 PM
I should also add, and I'm not sure why I didn't, that many scebes in the story were super sexy to read through.
Anonymous
8/15/18, 1:44 PM
Fantastic story. I love how his mind is manipulated and switched off.
Shinjo_sho
8/15/18, 11:28 AM
Dear friend, Thank you for support and comment. Actually every comment is fine. I can understand the point of view form one who read and feel that is bad English. ^^; (I know my English is not as good as used to) I'm also enjoy that ppl who endure it and have a fun with it. I will try to do better next time. XD
Anonymous
8/15/18, 11:06 AM
This certainly does not deserve the first two comments. You're in need of some editting and a bit of work on some of the idioms, both of which is perfectly understandable. Tbh, I've seen far worse from people who are native english speakers. I hope the first two comments didn't scare you away, I'm hoping you'll writing a part 2 for this.
8/15/18, 8:39 AM
Thank you for the comments. I understand that trans isn't for everyone and it was a big risk to go down that path. Still, thank you for reading all the way up to the end, and I hope that you will read my future stories which I promise won't be such drastic changes to as many characters. I look forward to seeing your opinions on my work as I continue to strive for improvement of skill.
Anonymous
8/15/18, 6:55 AM
Great story, didn’t read te orinal one but will do now; this one is a great series I’m looking forward for the conclusion!
IvorySilk
8/15/18, 5:10 AM
Thanks for all the wonderful feedback everyone! I really appreciate and all of your inputs. So, just in response to the last two comments, I will state that while I will not be extending this particular story, you will see Ty again in future installments. Just like how you will see the Dr. from “No Escape” again. ;)