Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/14/18, 2:30 PM
Please continue
Nnnrg
8/14/18, 2:23 PM
This was better than some native speakers' first tries at posting a story in English. All it needs is a little editing for word choice and idiom. If the English is "too bad to read" or you would "like to kill" yourself then please, go find somewhere else to read and stop harassing and insulting someone who actually wrote a decent story, just because you're too bad at English to understand and adjust for the differences in the way things are phrased.
Anonymous
8/14/18, 11:55 AM
Awesome writing. Very hot.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
8/14/18, 10:49 AM
I like the Ideia of having the good and bad ending, so we can pick the one we like the most
anybodys
8/14/18, 6:26 AM
Great addition. Love the attention to detail, love the kink.
Jul 25, 2014
Martin
8/14/18, 6:16 AM
Lovely! You should start to write more again, z119z!
Anonymous
8/14/18, 6:13 AM
I like the story just wish either the mind loss was less extreme or at least nonexistent for gays
Daniel
8/14/18, 4:38 AM
Would love to see what you could do with straight to gay hypno, alien substance posessing human beings ( rednecks, cops, powerful businessmen ) good job dude! I. J. S.
Daniel
8/14/18, 4:14 AM
Getting reallyhot- on to #3 I.J.S.
Daniel
8/14/18, 3:50 AM
Love gay Syfy, can't wait to see where it's going...I. J. S.