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Anonymous
8/13/18, 11:22 AM
I would like to read the next part please
Aug 12, 2018
Orc_br
8/13/18, 4:48 AM
Liked very much. The can't spell anymore was hot. I like when the dumber transformation goes beyond the can't understand my classes anymore. Being criative when showing how the people downgrade is a mark of a good writer.
Jan 13, 2010
Daniel
8/13/18, 4:07 AM
Ive always found butch, blue collar men hotter if they smokeThis story felt rushed but the hypno- smoking was cool I. J. S.
Anonymous
8/13/18, 3:49 AM
Great start!
Daniel
8/13/18, 3:30 AM
Reminded me of a xxx version of one of my favorite SyFy shows THE INVADERS. A bit confusing as the victim count began to rise, but HOT noonetheless I.J.S.
Anonymous
8/13/18, 3:24 AM
Just got kept interested in Mr. Olsen’s role in the Bulges System : ) Another great chapter!!
Aug 1, 2018
Anonymous
8/13/18, 3:04 AM
I love this! I want more!
Anonymous
8/13/18, 2:42 AM
Given the disclaimer that this is non native I think it was fine. It's a very good story and a good premis. I think if someone edited this for you it would be hot. More detail about the seduction and more on the developers as a sequel. I like it
Anonymous
8/13/18, 2:40 AM
It was so hot that Cameron had being transformed into a Buldge Boy and cannot wait to see his mind become loyal to Buldge and help transform Anthony too. Amazing setting!
Anonymous
8/13/18, 2:38 AM
Thanks so much!! Love it.