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8/11/18, 4:29 PM
Cutlerfan, that's not quite the story I want to write, but you definitely have my permission to use these characters and write a sequel that goes in that direction.
8/11/18, 4:17 PM
there's a simple solution to the boyfriend issue. Just have Richard fly in to try and "save" his lover but he gets enthralled himself. Maybe the guys get some thinking back and know they have to return to their old lives so they establish a new bathhouse back home. The oils and tea could be shipped to them to keep them well supplied. It could be a sort of secret bathhouse disguised as a Men's Club. Eventually the men would move to the club full time and have the enthralled lives they wanted without guys just disappearing or never return from their trip.There could be a trigger in their watches that made them temporarily revert to their apparently 'normal' self while they began to change their lives. They wouldn't need the watches when they moved in to the bath house and the watches could be used to gather men more slowly until they had enough for a community. Just an idea. I think their community could evolve into something more than just mind control.
Anonymous
8/11/18, 4:13 PM
Next chapter I hope is on the way. Number 5 is no time to stop and stay. The players 4 the round is 6 and change is constant. Can't wait to see!
Anonymous
8/11/18, 4:05 PM
I’m loving this.....the slight changes from the original make it fresh for me. I don’t mind the repetition. Very clever and very hot. Keep it up!
Cigarboycody
8/11/18, 3:57 PM
Well, those that aren't reading this don't know what they are missing. Maybe they can be rescued, only to set up a branch of the operation in their home town. Can't wait to read the ending!!
Anonymous
8/11/18, 3:18 PM
Dull and repeticious I "needed" to stop reading this.
8/11/18, 2:44 PM
Especially as there is a gay guy with a boyfriend. It's sad he is going to loose that. BUT, like I said, the individual segments on there own are quite well done and super hot. So I keep coming back. Lol
8/11/18, 2:41 PM
I like the sex and the massage and the straight to gay, but the whole worry they will stay here in the city as nothing rather then continue there lives changed but still productive just doesn't make it fun for me. That's why I keep hoping one of them will break free, rescue the others, go home, but they continue to be good boys with hard cocks in private. Basically the individual writing scenes are great and hot and fantastic and well done but the general overarching plot causes me more worry then enjoyment.
8/11/18, 2:10 PM
This is a terrific start, and I’m excited to see where it goes next.
Jakefox500@yahoo.com
8/11/18, 1:48 PM
An absolutely wonderful story with a great twist! I wish this author had written more.