Recent Comments

tomozco
8/10/18, 12:49 AM
Nicely written story! Somehow I missed it when it was first posted. I enjoyed it, it has many of the elements that I like, so no complaints from me! ;) I hope you'll come back to it for more, but I understand you have other works in the pipes as well. I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome aboard!
Nov 1, 2013
Daniejl
8/9/18, 11:14 PM
Top of the line SyFy eroticism. The attention to detail and fearless narrative gave me a good wank I.J.S.
Oct 1, 2013
Daniel
8/9/18, 10:27 PM
Hot....could've been longer- love mind control/ hypno corruotion
Anonymous
8/9/18, 10:21 PM
I agree with the above poster. A solid premise, even with the overly-repetitive usage of dreams and endless references to his eyes. The abundance of tags promised much, much more than these chapters delivered.
8/9/18, 10:18 PM
What a perfect ending for one of the hottest stories on here. Our protagonist has truly sunken to the lowest of lows, offering himself shamelessly to anyone with a dick, only to get discarded after being used as a cocksucker, publicly humiliating himself by offering himself as a complete fucktoy to Doma for all to hear and still getting rejected, and then finally getting gang-banged by both human and non-human participants alike. The reveal that his roommate had been orchestrating it all along and that his descent into faggotry had been inevitable since he first set foot into Doma's shop has such a deliciously fatalistic touch. Derek was helpless to prevent his ruin from the very first chapter and him being deceived into thinking he ever had a choice of escaping being the dogs' bitch by choosing to get the dog cum fucked into him by dozens of frat boys and even begging for it was the cherry on top. Really, no one really describes utter degradation and humiliation better than you, bravo.
Daniel
8/9/18, 10:12 PM
Very nice- terrific rape / submission scene Scott needs to 'chat' with some friends I.J.S.
mannmale007@gmail.com
8/9/18, 8:53 PM
agreed, i want him to accidentally touch the serum too
Anonymous
8/9/18, 6:59 PM
"The man Jaimie now occupied by the professors daughter went on to graduate with a degree in Psychology. He had dropped out of Football when he came out as as a woman trapped in a mans body and began dating other men. He was reputed to be the gentlest lover and so thoughful in bed. He was the poster child of the Gay community speaking out against sexual violence and domestic partner abuse." What a twist...
nycboot
8/9/18, 6:54 PM
Nice atmosphere. But with the tag #demon I was expecting it to go somewhere demonic, and it doesn't at all. Perhaps this is the first installment of several? Nice idea.
Anonymous
8/9/18, 4:43 PM
Really hope this is a continuing story. We need to see more of the Enforcer and how he fits into your universe!