Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/10/18, 12:42 PM
Good descriptions of the developing muscle bear and of the narrator's thoughts. Why did the conductor consciously rub his thumb over the ticket on the last day? Does he know what is happening? Did he make eye contact with the narrator? Does he want more? Does he like the aging and fat gain along with the muscle. Would his body type have gotten there eventually, anyway? So many questions this situation raises!
Aug 7, 2018
Dave
8/10/18, 12:10 PM
Fuckin love this story. Cigars and muscle growth. Damn!!!!
Anonymous
8/10/18, 10:18 AM
I want to see this as an episode of black mirror! It would be hot
8/10/18, 9:36 AM
I am seriously considering continuing this story, since people on my tumblr also wanted to see more of it too. I guess we'll see. Thanks for reading!
Anonymous
8/10/18, 5:02 AM
Awesome dude... If you could include guys with arms over head/hands on back of head- pits / pecs exposed... ;)
Aug 7, 2018
Anonymous
8/10/18, 4:06 AM
so hot hog
S
8/10/18, 2:33 AM
So hot. Have you minded starting a patreon?
tomozco
8/10/18, 12:49 AM
Nicely written story! Somehow I missed it when it was first posted. I enjoyed it, it has many of the elements that I like, so no complaints from me! ;) I hope you'll come back to it for more, but I understand you have other works in the pipes as well. I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome aboard!
Nov 1, 2013
Daniejl
8/9/18, 11:14 PM
Top of the line SyFy eroticism. The attention to detail and fearless narrative gave me a good wank I.J.S.
Oct 1, 2013
Daniel
8/9/18, 10:27 PM
Hot....could've been longer- love mind control/ hypno corruotion