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D
8/7/18, 3:50 PM
That was really f’n fun. Wonder what the shadows motivation was, and where I can find that beach ;)
Max
8/7/18, 2:20 PM
After all the buildup over the previous chapters, it was very well earned and very hot when Brent finally submitted and became Brenton. I hope now that he has become a good little schoolboy like his friends, all three of them can share a bed together. There has only been hints of the sexual transformation that the indoctrinated boys have undergone so far and now that Brenton is one of them I am looking forward to seeing the payoff ;-)
Daniel
8/7/18, 1:57 PM
Nice,colorfully descriptive stuff...I never thought .I'd say this, but there has been so much sex so far., it's wearing out it's welcome...I'm getting used to expecting the same thing from each encounter. I really was hoping you would do out and out hypno stuff...it's my #1 fetish...I.J.S.
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8/7/18, 1:30 PM
Loved it
Anonymous
8/7/18, 1:09 PM
Hot! Write more cock TF please!!!
Anonymous
8/7/18, 11:11 AM
It went from really hot to just really mean real quick. Didn’t like it at all.
R.
8/7/18, 9:13 AM
Man, I love this kind of parodies, and this one has me really excited for know what will come next. By the way, I like the changes on the names, that make it more like one of those porn spoof movies, and that's very fun, especially if you go for an over-the-top wacky angle. Keep doing that, buddy! By the way, I hope you decide to put that hot handsome hero, Peter Queer, in future chapters. You know, that guy Star something, the leader of those guardians of the space, or the milky way or whatever....
Anonymous
8/7/18, 4:44 AM
Will the update every come? I hope so, superman stories are my favorite!
Daniel
8/7/18, 2:36 AM
It's hot, but nothing new, when does the meteor come back into play? I.J.S.
Anonymous
8/7/18, 2:27 AM
You should expand the actual mind control portion here