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Daniel
8/6/18, 2:01 PM
D U D E !! I had to take a minute and pull myself together...what a wild, twisted down and dirty story. The sex scenes at the club were hot...but the construction site orgy just about pushed every button I have !! Please continue writing sensual erotic material I.J.S.
Anonymous
8/6/18, 1:59 PM
hot
8/6/18, 1:50 PM
Great start! I can't wait to see where this goes next.
screamingmoist
8/6/18, 1:49 PM
I don’t have anything to add to what LongtimeFan said other than to second that this was a great story.
Anonymous
8/6/18, 8:59 AM
I hope some of the effects are permanent.
Aug 3, 2018
Anonymous
8/6/18, 6:10 AM
More about the dad and his previous conquests would be hot
LongtimeFan
8/6/18, 4:32 AM
Sorry—I couldn’t resist one more! I also commend you for presenting the moral complexity of John’s rant. Now, there is NO place for homophobic comments, rants, and demeaning language in ANY circumstance—it’s always a choice to use those words. And yet while I disagree with John’s attacks, I also can’t help but empathize with the pain behind them—he tried so desperately to maintain his attention and the resulting money (his only income flow) by appeasing his viewers, but it was never enough. And the court of public opinion—also instant in the Internet age—didn’t see all of that pain; they simply condemned him to his life as a shattered, surgically altered man. And I’ll bet that those same gay men who were demanding all the changes and screaming for more read and commented on those very articles you mention, talking about how horrible John was...never realizing that they had a hand in the whole situation. ...Wow. Thanks for letting me write a thesis on your story! I’d love to keep analyzing it. Your work is beyond phenomenal. WELL DONE.
LongtimeFan
8/6/18, 4:27 AM
(Continued from above) 2. THE PROBLEMS OF FAN CULTURE: Tied to the first reason is your perfect takedown of the terrifying mass we call the Internet. I’ve seen so many YouTubers fall down this same trap—nothing is ever enough. It’s ALWAYS “more, more, more!” Even on this site, people (myself include) love to comment “What’s the next chapter?” We are a generation used to instant gratification—and the threat of “We can watch someone else unless you give us more” is very real to these people trying to make a living off of their fame. Every prank, every song, every sexy shot...it’s never enough. More, more, more. And yet... 3. THE FETISHIZATION OF STRAIGHT MEN: I love the turn where gay men start turning on John for “acting gay,” despite demanding he enhance his ass and act stereotypically “gayer” earlier. It’s another comment on the fickleness of viewers: they want it THEIR way, and they don’t want actual gay men—just the appearance of them. It reduces models to fetishes and puppets, designed to play a game where they have no control and are forced to follow the whims of a crowd with zero attention span. And the continued fetishization of straight men to APPEAR gay, but not actually BE gay, is a psychological riddle about both the gay and straight communities that could take up a whole book—and this story captures the struggle perfectly.
LongtimeFan
8/6/18, 4:19 AM
Dear Blightcaller, I’ve read many stories on this site. Some get me hard; some make me cry; some make me happy. But none—NONE—has EVER made me think the way this amazing story does! There is SO MUCH to read here, and you paint such an incredibly vivid picture. If you don’t mind, I’d love to share my thoughts about three particularly strong points in this and my next comment. Thank you! 1. THE CRITIQUE OF THE INTERNET: The way you describe John’s rise to fame and eventual destruction is a perfect crystallization of the unique problems of the Internet age. Sure, in the past, “anybody” could write a book or become a movie star, but we live in an era where top-quality videos are easy to film on phones. Like the modeling agency woman says, there are SO MANY up and coming people, and it leads to a feeling of treating those models like toys—shiny things to play with for a while, then get bored of.
Daniel
8/6/18, 3:05 AM
Usually not my type of hot, but dude you're knocking this one outta the park ! More revenge villians please and corrupt them good and nastyI.J.S.