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Daniel
8/3/18, 12:24 AM
Getting better.....but ohhh the possibilities...I.J.S.
Daniel
8/3/18, 12:03 AM
Not enough SyFy, too much SWORD IN THE STONE...I.J.S.
Daniel
8/2/18, 11:24 PM
The opening absorbtion of the teenage boy BLEW ME AWAY-no other way to say it "the devil is in the details" and dude, you nailed it !! After that, meh but I'm hoping we get more SyFy and less Game of Thrones....I.J.S.
Daniel
8/2/18, 10:53 PM
Whoa dude ! Freakin ' hot ! An awful lot of characters to keep track of...but hypnotism, bondage, government agents, cops, kidnapping- it's like a gay MISSION IMPOSSIBLE- great work, more please....I.J.S. ,
8/2/18, 10:40 PM
Well ... that's it! I did a few, very minor edits. But this story is largely unchanged from when I wrote it in 2007. It's blows my mind that I forgot about this one. So I still got to thank Toy #4 for bringing it back to me. Reading it again, I can see how my kinks of brotherhood, alignment of minds and latex/rubber is still pretty much the same. There are many similarities between this story and the others. I just vary on kinky situations. In this story, I obviously focused on being restrained in a chair, the merger of the bodies and the (literal) mind-fuck at the end. I wonder if I had recently watched 2001: A Space Odyssey when I wrote this story because I seem to really focus on those glowing red lights. It may have been a tribute to HAL 9000. Anyways, guys ... I hope you enjoyed this one. Until next time ....
Aug 1, 2018
Anonymous
8/2/18, 10:01 PM
mm, yes. more please. mabe he could make some money for his son
sweatnosis
8/2/18, 9:24 PM
Oh, forgot to mention... That dynamic where Sal couldn't speak, but Derek was with him the whole time, understanding what he would have said and speaking for him - that was brilliant. Spoke to something deep in me. Maybe partly because I was a "Derek" to my real life little brother's "Sal" during the time he had a speech impediment. But even beyond that, having a "Derek" who *I* was able to depend on like that would be amazing. My mouth gets me in trouble all the time.
sweatnosis
8/2/18, 9:10 PM
The line starting with "Derek pulled his new iPod out..." threw me - I'm guessing that was supposed to be Squatter, not Derek, right? There were one or two more times when you just used pronouns instead of names where I wasn't sure who you were talking about. Otherwise, HOT story! I usually like the transformations drawn out a little longer, but this was so filled with almost non-stop kinky sex that drawing it out longer would have just gotten in the way. Great job!
Daniel
8/2/18, 8:46 PM
In it's own erotically detailed way ( so f*****g HOT! ) it reminded me of the corruption and darkness of SALEM'S LOT...X LN T JOB DUDE! .....IJ.S.
MalSkin
8/2/18, 8:26 PM
Great story line, I am wondering if Scott is being prepare to be the leader of the robots - all robots need a leader to give commands