Recent Comments

Daniel
8/3/18, 2:30 AM
This is the start of something HOT- can't wait to read on !! I.J.S.
Kyle
8/3/18, 2:06 AM
Loving this story!
Sep 15, 2009
Daniel
8/3/18, 2:03 AM
Terrificly sexy, definite 'wank' material...gimme more !! I.J.S.
Jul 31, 2009
Daniel
8/3/18, 1:40 AM
Yeah man! Really fyyyne on every level- dude, this was 'wank city' please contine writing...thank you I.J.S.
Daniel
8/3/18, 12:50 AM
Much more on target- the 'draining' scene was hot...I.J.S.
Kyle
8/3/18, 12:46 AM
Wow, this is eleven years old? Well done, it reads really well. I love your stuff and this is a really great start. Great pacing, suspense. And hot, of course.
Daniel
8/3/18, 12:24 AM
Getting better.....but ohhh the possibilities...I.J.S.
Daniel
8/3/18, 12:03 AM
Not enough SyFy, too much SWORD IN THE STONE...I.J.S.
Daniel
8/2/18, 11:24 PM
The opening absorbtion of the teenage boy BLEW ME AWAY-no other way to say it "the devil is in the details" and dude, you nailed it !! After that, meh but I'm hoping we get more SyFy and less Game of Thrones....I.J.S.
Daniel
8/2/18, 10:53 PM
Whoa dude ! Freakin ' hot ! An awful lot of characters to keep track of...but hypnotism, bondage, government agents, cops, kidnapping- it's like a gay MISSION IMPOSSIBLE- great work, more please....I.J.S. ,