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8/2/18, 10:40 PM
Well ... that's it! I did a few, very minor edits. But this story is largely unchanged from when I wrote it in 2007. It's blows my mind that I forgot about this one. So I still got to thank Toy #4 for bringing it back to me. Reading it again, I can see how my kinks of brotherhood, alignment of minds and latex/rubber is still pretty much the same. There are many similarities between this story and the others. I just vary on kinky situations. In this story, I obviously focused on being restrained in a chair, the merger of the bodies and the (literal) mind-fuck at the end. I wonder if I had recently watched 2001: A Space Odyssey when I wrote this story because I seem to really focus on those glowing red lights. It may have been a tribute to HAL 9000. Anyways, guys ... I hope you enjoyed this one. Until next time ....
Aug 1, 2018
Anonymous
8/2/18, 10:01 PM
mm, yes. more please. mabe he could make some money for his son
sweatnosis
8/2/18, 9:24 PM
Oh, forgot to mention... That dynamic where Sal couldn't speak, but Derek was with him the whole time, understanding what he would have said and speaking for him - that was brilliant. Spoke to something deep in me. Maybe partly because I was a "Derek" to my real life little brother's "Sal" during the time he had a speech impediment. But even beyond that, having a "Derek" who *I* was able to depend on like that would be amazing. My mouth gets me in trouble all the time.
sweatnosis
8/2/18, 9:10 PM
The line starting with "Derek pulled his new iPod out..." threw me - I'm guessing that was supposed to be Squatter, not Derek, right? There were one or two more times when you just used pronouns instead of names where I wasn't sure who you were talking about. Otherwise, HOT story! I usually like the transformations drawn out a little longer, but this was so filled with almost non-stop kinky sex that drawing it out longer would have just gotten in the way. Great job!
Daniel
8/2/18, 8:46 PM
In it's own erotically detailed way ( so f*****g HOT! ) it reminded me of the corruption and darkness of SALEM'S LOT...X LN T JOB DUDE! .....IJ.S.
MalSkin
8/2/18, 8:26 PM
Great story line, I am wondering if Scott is being prepare to be the leader of the robots - all robots need a leader to give commands
Aug 1, 2018
MalSkin
8/2/18, 8:22 PM
really liked this story I agree if possible to write a prequel to this story
Anonymous
8/2/18, 6:22 PM
Like the sex changes, would love it more if the mind was less affected. Very hot though!
Anonymous
8/2/18, 5:05 PM
I’m liking this more than the original storyline :) keep up the good work!
Daniel
8/2/18, 2:09 PM
One of the best I've read...and 'enjoyed' I. J. S.