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Sep 15, 2009
Daniel
8/3/18, 2:03 AM
Terrificly sexy, definite 'wank' material...gimme more !! I.J.S.
Jul 31, 2009
Daniel
8/3/18, 1:40 AM
Yeah man! Really fyyyne on every level- dude, this was 'wank city' please contine writing...thank you I.J.S.
Daniel
8/3/18, 12:50 AM
Much more on target- the 'draining' scene was hot...I.J.S.
Kyle
8/3/18, 12:46 AM
Wow, this is eleven years old? Well done, it reads really well. I love your stuff and this is a really great start. Great pacing, suspense. And hot, of course.
Daniel
8/3/18, 12:24 AM
Getting better.....but ohhh the possibilities...I.J.S.
Daniel
8/3/18, 12:03 AM
Not enough SyFy, too much SWORD IN THE STONE...I.J.S.
Daniel
8/2/18, 11:24 PM
The opening absorbtion of the teenage boy BLEW ME AWAY-no other way to say it "the devil is in the details" and dude, you nailed it !! After that, meh but I'm hoping we get more SyFy and less Game of Thrones....I.J.S.
Daniel
8/2/18, 10:53 PM
Whoa dude ! Freakin ' hot ! An awful lot of characters to keep track of...but hypnotism, bondage, government agents, cops, kidnapping- it's like a gay MISSION IMPOSSIBLE- great work, more please....I.J.S. ,
8/2/18, 10:40 PM
Well ... that's it! I did a few, very minor edits. But this story is largely unchanged from when I wrote it in 2007. It's blows my mind that I forgot about this one. So I still got to thank Toy #4 for bringing it back to me. Reading it again, I can see how my kinks of brotherhood, alignment of minds and latex/rubber is still pretty much the same. There are many similarities between this story and the others. I just vary on kinky situations. In this story, I obviously focused on being restrained in a chair, the merger of the bodies and the (literal) mind-fuck at the end. I wonder if I had recently watched 2001: A Space Odyssey when I wrote this story because I seem to really focus on those glowing red lights. It may have been a tribute to HAL 9000. Anyways, guys ... I hope you enjoyed this one. Until next time ....
Aug 1, 2018
Anonymous
8/2/18, 10:01 PM
mm, yes. more please. mabe he could make some money for his son