Darmani: In many of rubbrsome's stories he reveals a fetish for connecting the mind of the protagonist to others, usually a greater force that is assimilating men. One of his older ones (I think the first one that fully explored it) was "The Alignment": https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/2019 One of his newer stories that explores that more deeply is "The Conscript": https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/6097 (This story has an ending that I can describe only as being incredibly beautiful.)

Alignment fetish? What's that?

I feel as if you do a pretty interesting Job showing how they sort of slide into their roles and the setup. I save the weakest part is the not necessarily technical but flow and feel of the writing. But in terms of ideas the setup for mind control how the exposure happens over time. And how even the dominant one changes and of course the actions that are described are all interesting. I hope that you revisit and refine this along with your craftsmanship even if not necessarily this Trio then this scenario and how things improve. Or maybe you figure out a way to make this something someone else wants to play with

Hiya rubbrsome - wow. While the original Brain Feed is certainly one of the most unusual (and consequently, one of your best) stories (and one of the best or most memorable stories on this site), your writing and tastes have evolved. The original story had some rubber elements, and barely had any of your alignment fetish. Both of those fetishes as expressed in words you have developed through succeeding stories such as "The Alignment" or those stories where the guy winds up in a rubber pod. In those stories you explored elements of your fetishes, trying to see how far you can go with extending them - sort of like a gemologist slowly inspecting the facets of a diamond. And as I wrote to you at the end of your previous story, I was hoping you'd experiment more with avoiding real-time by suspending it so that you could supply more vivid description and the reader could really enjoy and revel in the arousal brought about through your words - you achieved it amazingly well!! I'm fully aware that creative people don't want to go back to their original work - it represents a point in time and we all grow and evolve beyond that. But I'm so thankful that you have given us this alternative Brain Feed. It's not only that I want to j/o continuously while reading it, but whereas the language in the original Brain Feed was straightforward and direct, your greater mastery of writing is revealed in this story as you allow the character to think and ponder, question himself and seemingly make decisions (either by himself or by the System). Moreover, there are a few unexpected plot twists (like the complex subjugation of Alan) that make it a greater experience than simply knowing what happens at the end of the original Brain Feed. One thing that amazes me so much (and I guess others as well) is your alignment fetish. On the surface it's not really sex or sexual, and yet I find it so incredibly hot and arousing. Of course you're explored that in many of your stories, but perhaps in a future story you can revisit that and lead the reader to examine and explore what makes alignment so sexually arousing. Your writing is so totally amazing - thank you for sharing so much of yourself through these stories!

Great.

please email me

I loved the finale so much. Even tho theit memories were altered they still stayed together

Yess! Love stories with farting and scat! Oink oink!

Truly a terrific read...it's like SALEM'S LOT meets STAND BY ME...dude - you're good!I.J.S.

WOW....another great story!! Looking forward to the next part -