Recent Comments

Daniel
8/2/18, 12:24 AM
Good stuff! Hypno spirals turn me on as did th.eu detoailed sexual activities I.J.S.
Kyle
8/2/18, 12:07 AM
Great beginning. Looking forward to seeing where it leads.
nerdy.suited.venom
8/1/18, 11:59 PM
Loved the chapter with cops and Kyle. Although would love to see servant Kyle in a lot mire action. Ed knows what he did he needs to put commands in place to keep Kyle from running away and getting revenge. Nothing like a childhood bully with a gorgeous body forced to look proper with a nice haircut and cover up their proud body in a tight, restrictive, uncomfortable servant uniform while working 17 hour shifts. Although I'd personally like to see more pleading or letting him verbally detest his displeasure while forced to do a task. Rather them hateful glares. Like while shining shoes or giving foot rubs.
Kyle
8/1/18, 11:58 PM
Another great story from you. Thank you. Fantastic concepts are so well written.
Anonymous
8/1/18, 11:11 PM
Weight gain is a hot fetish, I'd love to see that explored with Dunn. Make him learn to love being ugly. Make him sexually aroused by it. Make all these victims start to enjoy their humiliation.
Daniel
8/1/18, 9:54 PM
Whoa dude, I gotta take a minute to caglm down...that was EXACTLY the type of story I've been looking for : Bikers, cops,hypnotism ( my # 1 fetish ) bondage- you need to keep writing bud, I'll be there ! I.J.S.
Betasskin
8/1/18, 9:34 PM
Dynamite stuff there. Tip top old chap.
Aug 1, 2018
8/1/18, 9:27 PM
Oh wow this was hot. Love the concept. So sexy!
Martin
8/1/18, 9:12 PM
Hi Nicky, I've edited your story to use proper Markdown for your links and the other stuff. I hope you don't mind.
Aug 1, 2018
Martin
8/1/18, 9:03 PM
Hi JoSmith, I took the liberty of editing the links in your story to show up properly using "Markup" code. If you want to know how this works, you can edit this story to see what I've done or read the links about Markdown which I put on the story submission page.