Recent Comments

R.
7/31/18, 10:40 PM
The story is very good, but I love what you did with both cops. The humiliation is just great! Please, make Dunn keep part of his uniform (or Barnes' dirty ruined uniform, with his cap and badge, once he had quit to his job). It's very hot to destroy and humiliate an authority figure, so please let him keep some of his cop traits. Take your time to describe how he slowly loses his good looks, and how he sees his change. In his now debased and clumsy state, maybe Ed could rename him and call him Officer Dunce or something like that, to remind him that he once was an officer, but now is just a dirty dumb pig.
Anonymous
7/31/18, 10:33 PM
VERY, VERY HOT!
Daniel
7/31/18, 10:29 PM
Hot stuff ! Nice useage of the SyFy 'leech' angle. Hot, solid description on the drugging and seduction solid characterizations...good job dude ! I.J.S.
Daniel
7/31/18, 7:37 PM
Dude, you've got yourself areal winner here ! Big ole' Bikers, drugs, mind andbody corruption, all my fetishes in one! The sense of realistic detail wasHOT I. J. S.
codypony@aol.com
7/31/18, 7:34 PM
i have always been a fan of mecha-cyber-flesh integration. Very promising start Sir!
Daniel
7/31/18, 5:52 PM
Solid sex stuff- a bit too ambiguous not much background info to invest in...I.J.S.
Max
7/31/18, 5:50 PM
I really like this story, and the world building you have put into it. I like all the buildup of Brent's resistance and how he did it, and it was pretty ingenious the way Glassman seems to have convinced him to surrender "willingly". I hope the next chapter now goes into detail showing Brent's complete brainwashing into a good little schoolboy like his friends. I'm sure you have more than a few surprises in store for the boys and us readers as well. ;-)
Daniel
7/31/18, 4:58 PM
Good stuff, thanks!
Anonymous
7/31/18, 3:18 PM
I am absolutely loving this! Love the descriptions and the variety of transformations. Great story, hot writing!!
7/31/18, 2:25 PM
I like this series. I cannot wait to see what changes happen next and if they start to spread to the rest of the school or the other frats.