Recent Comments

8/1/18, 12:13 AM
Great story. I have to agree to two of the above: 1) I love mind loss, and 2) wish the mental changes were more gradual with some resistance. But as written, still EXCELLENT
Anonymous
7/31/18, 11:45 PM
I agree with R
Daniel
7/31/18, 11:31 PM
D U D E !! This is f*****g hot ! Haven't really even gotten to the 'meat" ( sorry, I had to go there ) of the story, and the elements of first class 'nasty' are there. Loving the details in every area, stoked to move on and experience what you have in store...I.J.S.
Anonymous
7/31/18, 11:05 PM
i loved it but the part when he told Dunn to be ugly... that is waste
R.
7/31/18, 10:40 PM
The story is very good, but I love what you did with both cops. The humiliation is just great! Please, make Dunn keep part of his uniform (or Barnes' dirty ruined uniform, with his cap and badge, once he had quit to his job). It's very hot to destroy and humiliate an authority figure, so please let him keep some of his cop traits. Take your time to describe how he slowly loses his good looks, and how he sees his change. In his now debased and clumsy state, maybe Ed could rename him and call him Officer Dunce or something like that, to remind him that he once was an officer, but now is just a dirty dumb pig.
Anonymous
7/31/18, 10:33 PM
VERY, VERY HOT!
Daniel
7/31/18, 10:29 PM
Hot stuff ! Nice useage of the SyFy 'leech' angle. Hot, solid description on the drugging and seduction solid characterizations...good job dude ! I.J.S.
Daniel
7/31/18, 7:37 PM
Dude, you've got yourself areal winner here ! Big ole' Bikers, drugs, mind andbody corruption, all my fetishes in one! The sense of realistic detail wasHOT I. J. S.
codypony@aol.com
7/31/18, 7:34 PM
i have always been a fan of mecha-cyber-flesh integration. Very promising start Sir!
Daniel
7/31/18, 5:52 PM
Solid sex stuff- a bit too ambiguous not much background info to invest in...I.J.S.