Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/30/18, 4:32 AM
Thanks for the answer couldn't find anything about a story by that title either. Thank you for the other side to this tale rubbrsome, it was much needed delight and answered a lot of questions about the modification process as well as adding more depth all around. We're not worthy! You make giving in to what some would deem a precarious and high cost bliss seem like the most enjoyable option to surrender to. No doubt if cum centers were around today that man would surely crumble to their knees in cumpliance and accept their new role with hefty boner in hand!
7/30/18, 3:45 AM
Thank you for the kind compliments. At this time, I have no plans to continue or make any further additions to Brain Feed. Just saying this. In my opinion, I don't feel this story lives up to Brain Feed. That's why I titled it "Deleted Scenes". Like for a film, sometimes deleted scenes may be fun to watch, maybe even give a greater depth to the story ... but overall, the scenes are not required or necessary for the original cut of the story. Also, one comment mentioned a story called Conversion. As good as I can recall, I have never written a story with that title. I wonder if the reader is mistaken another story for my own. Maybe I'm wrong. But I went through my list of stories and wasn't able to find anything by that name. So I didn't write Conversion.
OINK! OINK!
7/30/18, 2:42 AM
Cannot get enough of this story. HOT.
Daniel
7/30/18, 2:31 AM
An EPIC tale of somewhat colorful male characters doing somewhat colorful male things, the drugs being introduced during the rjape scene was a very sexy, very necessary thing.It was a good solid read..but...even if the icecream is delicious, there are times when one can have too much icecream... I J. S.
Anonymous
7/30/18, 1:45 AM
I agree with Nudge.
Nudge
7/30/18, 1:13 AM
I like this story, it's good transformation, but now that all of the characters accept everything at face-value, there's no more tension-- I think if I were you I wouldn't be quite so quick to wipe all of their minds and make them love it. From here on in they won't really notice any change, and everything will be just thrilling. It's like the climax is already passed at two thirds of the way through. Great writing.
7/30/18, 12:26 AM
Excellent! I love the inclusion of a father in law. The suggestion that in the future Andy will dump his fiance and have the full blessing and encouragement of Pete, her father, is awesome! It'd be great if she caught them in a sex act and they couldn't care less and went about their business. Ha!
Anonymous
7/30/18, 12:05 AM
I want a part 3 so badly! This is hot!!
Anonymous
7/29/18, 9:24 PM
love it.... wish I could do the same
M1
7/29/18, 8:50 PM
AMAZING Story - AGAIN!!!! Hopefully there is a 3rd part cumming soon???