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Anonymous
7/29/18, 4:18 PM
Holy fuck you are the greatest and Brain Feed is probably my favourite story ever. Amazing.
7/29/18, 3:47 PM
I wrote this in a day and was, still am actually, proud of it warts and all. I guess o figured others would like it as well.
Martin
7/29/18, 3:39 PM
Daniel, if you ever read this: I'd like to give you a badge for the guy who writes the most comments by far on this site :) And this is really appreciated. Authors need comments as their main motivation to write. So please continue... :)
Jun 15, 2007
Daniel
7/29/18, 3:16 PM
Some nice touches, but Vampires controlling and corrupting men are moremystyle I. J. S.
Daniel
7/29/18, 2:40 PM
Dude- First things first, I am NOT iN any, way someone who babbles on and on about porn. If hits my fetish buttons, that's fine- no expectations, no disappointments. Having said that, I've got to tell you that you have written not just an excellent, sexy, corruptive, unafraid to 'go there', intelligent, fully developed story, with well defined, colorful, hot and well utilized characters for a wonderful Erotic publishing site ( consider all 'buttons ' pushed ), but a compelling well done" what comes ( cums ?) next appeal, a solid worthy of SyFy mini- series consideration. Yes,there are many of the tropes that come along with any Alien Invasion tale, but they are used in clever, inventive, thrillingly perverse ways ! Please give us anotheruuuuookioo saga in this same vain ( I really dig well done Alien takeover stories, as vividly detailed as possible ). Again, thank you for time 'well spent' I. J.S.ooi
Anonymous
7/29/18, 2:38 PM
^ Otherwise I absolutely loved this story. I hope there’s more to the series!
7/29/18, 2:37 PM
Thank you, thank you, thank you! I'm a big fan of "Brain Feed," and it's great to see you returning to the Cum Centers. I don't envy you, because I think it must have been really tricky getting the right narrative voice for Dave, especially once he starts to get assimilated into the system. And at times, he did seem a little too self-aware for my tastes, especially when compared to the uncanny smiling Dave we see in the original story. But I also thought we also got some incredibly hot scenes here, especially with his initial assimilation into the system and with the takeover of Bob.
Anonymous
7/29/18, 2:37 PM
I only wish the mental changes were more gradual, with the physical changes outpacing them only to catch up later.
7/29/18, 1:18 PM
Well, I really love the loss of mind, and I think this story is amazingly hot! Thanks for writing it, and I hope there are even more installments to cum!
toy #4
7/29/18, 7:40 AM
Conversion (not published here) is pretty good too.