Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/30/18, 1:45 AM
I agree with Nudge.
Nudge
7/30/18, 1:13 AM
I like this story, it's good transformation, but now that all of the characters accept everything at face-value, there's no more tension-- I think if I were you I wouldn't be quite so quick to wipe all of their minds and make them love it. From here on in they won't really notice any change, and everything will be just thrilling. It's like the climax is already passed at two thirds of the way through. Great writing.
7/30/18, 12:26 AM
Excellent! I love the inclusion of a father in law. The suggestion that in the future Andy will dump his fiance and have the full blessing and encouragement of Pete, her father, is awesome! It'd be great if she caught them in a sex act and they couldn't care less and went about their business. Ha!
Anonymous
7/30/18, 12:05 AM
I want a part 3 so badly! This is hot!!
Anonymous
7/29/18, 9:24 PM
love it.... wish I could do the same
M1
7/29/18, 8:50 PM
AMAZING Story - AGAIN!!!! Hopefully there is a 3rd part cumming soon???
Anonymous
7/29/18, 7:56 PM
@toy #4 Do you know where we can find this "Conversion" story?
Jun 28, 2007
Daniel
7/29/18, 7:52 PM
Good, solid revenge tale ( no pun intended ) perhaps a bit too long with little variation once the story got rolling Thank You I.J.S.
7/29/18, 6:09 PM
LongtimeFan, if you're ever in Tbilisi, Georgia, be sure to visit Bathhouse No. 5.
LongtimeFan
7/29/18, 5:29 PM
Really, Hypnothrill? Where is this place you speak of? I want to see it for myself! :p And Daniel, what an awesome comment. You capture this work so well! :D