Some nice touches, but Vampires controlling and corrupting men are moremystyle I. J. S.

Dude- First things first, I am NOT iN any, way someone who babbles on and on about porn. If hits my fetish buttons, that's fine- no expectations, no disappointments. Having said that, I've got to tell you that you have written not just an excellent, sexy, corruptive, unafraid to 'go there', intelligent, fully developed story, with well defined, colorful, hot and well utilized characters for a wonderful Erotic publishing site ( consider all 'buttons ' pushed ), but a compelling well done" what comes ( cums ?) next appeal, a solid worthy of SyFy mini- series consideration. Yes,there are many of the tropes that come along with any Alien Invasion tale, but they are used in clever, inventive, thrillingly perverse ways ! Please give us anotheruuuuookioo saga in this same vain ( I really dig well done Alien takeover stories, as vividly detailed as possible ). Again, thank you for time 'well spent' I. J.S.ooi

^ Otherwise I absolutely loved this story. I hope there’s more to the series!

Thank you, thank you, thank you! I'm a big fan of "Brain Feed," and it's great to see you returning to the Cum Centers. I don't envy you, because I think it must have been really tricky getting the right narrative voice for Dave, especially once he starts to get assimilated into the system. And at times, he did seem a little too self-aware for my tastes, especially when compared to the uncanny smiling Dave we see in the original story. But I also thought we also got some incredibly hot scenes here, especially with his initial assimilation into the system and with the takeover of Bob.

I only wish the mental changes were more gradual, with the physical changes outpacing them only to catch up later.

Well, I really love the loss of mind, and I think this story is amazingly hot! Thanks for writing it, and I hope there are even more installments to cum!

Conversion (not published here) is pretty good too.

My all time favorite...

Too bad being gay didn't save the mind. That would be hot. The physical enhancement without loss of mind. (I really dislike the loss of mind.)

First, I must explain that over the years, I have received many request to write a follow up to Brain Feed. It was only during a conversation with another writer, that he asked a question regarding the original story. My answer was something like: "Oh! Well ... when Jacob was doing this, David was doing that." And that's when I understood that I could never write a sequel. But what I could write was a "side-quel". I could fill in the missing gaps. I could elaborate what David was doing behind the scenes, and what Jacob never understood. So I really really hope that this satisfies any need for a sequel. The original Brain Feed is probably my best story. I absolutely DO NOT expect this story to better that one. But maybe I can just satisfy those that have been craving a follow-up all these years. In writing this story, several people were invaluable to me. They went back to the original Brain Feed, picked apart all the details and tried to make sure the two stories exist in harmony. I didn't want any continuity errors. And as I wrote, they would message me on where I was contradicting the original story. So I'm extremely indebted to my proofreaders. Thank you thank you thank you. I can't say it enough. You guys rocked it! Lastly, I really hope (as I said before) that this comes close to what I achieved before. I'm going to be honest, I don't think I write as good as I used to. I wrote my first gay fantasy story back in 2004. That was 14 years ago. And looking at my computer, I have over fifty short stories. I don't know how many times I can keep churning out gay fantasies and rubber dreams. So if I can just come close to the original Brain Feed ... well then ... I consider this a success. And of course, any apologies for the lengthy story. Brain Feed was posted in one, long format. And I thought: "Why the hell not?" Why not just give it to them in one fell swoop? So here you go. Enjoy!!!