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Blue Moon Rose
7/27/18, 10:01 AM
Thanks reading and for your insight Boon. I have to admit this is my first story so I knew going in that I would hit a few bumps in writing four characters. But I will take what you’ve said into account especially for future stories.
Boon
7/27/18, 5:27 AM
I think this is a good story, and usually I would be delighted with it, but I must say that for some reason, I find Liam utterly despicable. I mean, the character that he has become, this 'Daddy' made me lose the interest on the story. I can't point exactly why, I've enjoyed stories with nasty characters dominating others, but maybe its because he was supposedly Ash's friend, and now he's a sadistic sociopath that pretends to be somehow nice with his lovers, instead of being openly evil. That part of being "a gentle leader" and "protective", when he's in fact an abusive bastard makes me feel very unconfortable. Again is just me, but I had to mention it.
Anonymous
7/27/18, 3:43 AM
Love twists and turns. Hot!!!
7/27/18, 2:48 AM
The gay Jumanji I always wanted to see. Great idea. Great story. I can't wait to read the continuation
Daniel
7/27/18, 2:40 AM
Well dude, you've done it, my favorite so far !! I.J.S.
Daniel
7/27/18, 2:13 AM
In total agreement with the above post.....I.J.S.
Jul 25, 2018
Anonymous
7/27/18, 2:01 AM
the image of jason has great, brown eyes, just as depicted in the story
Daniel
7/27/18, 1:37 AM
One of the hottest, most corruptive stories I've read, they sh.ould fertilize them with fresh semen ! Dude whata great story I.J.S.
Danieli
7/27/18, 1:04 AM
Great story-, wanted the conversion of t,he cop to take longer- corruption is so HOT IJS