Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/26/18, 3:42 PM
I like your writing. You're very descriptive of the sex and you hit a lot of the right buttons for me. I have trouble following your stories though. You move so fast from scene to scene that I have trouble keeping up. I think that if you added more establishing paragraphs and more details that don’t involve sex your writing would be a lot easier to read, at least for me.
Anonymous
7/26/18, 3:14 PM
Terrifying for the TA! Great build up as the reader slowly realizes that the narrator is being manipulated and changed. The intervention by their friend was unexpected, but a nice plot twist. Good job with this story of mind control and body transformation!
mdlftr
7/26/18, 2:54 PM
Brilliant! I just re-read this after a few years. I love the subtle growing mind control elements, the humor, the guided, supported muscle growth and the oblivious first-person narrator. This story hits on a fantasy of a lot of guys -- change your current life into something stronger, better, purer - and dedicated to a cause. Thanks for writing!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
7/26/18, 2:18 PM
I'm glad taht Squatter was able to help his friend at the and
Daniel
7/26/18, 1:50 PM
ICorrupting Barry/ straight to gay du des, hypno, mind control, men in uniforms... I have found XANADU !! I. J. S.
Anonymous
7/26/18, 1:27 PM
I like all your work!
Anonymous
7/26/18, 10:14 AM
Loving the story
ed2you2@gmail.com
7/26/18, 9:10 AM
Too incredible. Loved that he did not feel what you were doing. Have fantasized about with a few I know
Jun 29, 2018
Anonymous
7/26/18, 6:32 AM
The whole dean thing at the end felt forced. There was nothing leading up to it so it just kinda came outta left field.
Daniel
7/26/18, 3:44 AM
So creative, imaginative, primal andHOT!!' I. J. S.