Recent Comments

LongtimeFan
7/24/18, 12:49 PM
HOT DAMN! What an incredible story! Short, sweet, and EXTREMELY sexy: muscle growth and dumbing down are my biggest buttons. I love the descriptions of the transforming men, and the horror movie elements. Great work! :D
Sthessexguy
7/24/18, 10:53 AM
Need to see more of this
Anonymous
7/24/18, 10:22 AM
how will Ash end up as?
Anonymous
7/24/18, 3:26 AM
Perfect continuation of "The Change" is the stage set for Prim to enter? Maybe Pete can cameo with Greg. Superb writing and an amazing story
Anonymous
7/24/18, 3:18 AM
What an incredible story! Would-be writers -- this is how you write.
Anonymous
7/24/18, 2:43 AM
Make ash Lee’s sissy husband and the twin’s submissive Dad
rawge
7/24/18, 1:51 AM
good knowledge of Mormon missionaries. more please!
Red
7/23/18, 6:22 PM
It would be funny if they all came back to earth but Ash
Anonymous
7/23/18, 6:18 PM
Hope a new chapter comes soon it’s been too long
Anonymous
7/23/18, 6:06 PM
What will happen in the end will they stay in heaven or go back to earth