Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/19/18, 5:33 AM
Hits all my buttons - innocence, smoking, Devil, hypnosis...…. awesome!
Anonymous
7/19/18, 4:52 AM
Great story. Anxious for chapter 4 :)
Anonymous
7/19/18, 4:51 AM
Loved it
Jul 16, 2018
The_Supernatural_D
7/19/18, 4:06 AM
This had a very strong "Five Nights at Freddy's" feel to it. I like it.
Bibimbap
7/19/18, 3:55 AM
Ohhh, excelente, es muy buena noticia saber que sigues escribiendo ideas nuevas. Estaré esperando ansiosamente esa nueva historia. :) Y quizá sí te ayude, a mi me sirve mucho cambiar de proyecto cuando estoy atorado, lo mejor es descansar un poco para refrescar la mente (pero espero sí la acabes je, je. Aunque no sea un final perfecto, siempre se agradece un final que venga del propio autor en vez de imaginar lo que pudo ser).
Jun 8, 2005
Anonymous
7/19/18, 3:54 AM
The Slaver has some weird little writing quirks and kinks that aren't quite my thing, but IMO this story is a classic. One that got me into the genre.
Anonymous
7/19/18, 2:41 AM
Make ash their baby brother
LongtimeFan
7/19/18, 1:25 AM
Awesome story! :D Love the descriptions, gradual brainwashing, sports theme, and picture (both of those guys are cuuuuute). ;p I also like that even though Chris did the hypnosis, there was some genuine affection and love there. All in all, terrific! :)
Aonghas
7/19/18, 12:57 AM
please sir, could we have some more?
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
7/19/18, 12:55 AM
When & where are these lads traveling again?