Recent Comments

nycboot
7/12/18, 8:20 PM
I was going along with it (hard as it was) until the sex change. Then it ceases to become a story and more of a dumping ground for "what can I think up next?"
M
7/12/18, 7:28 PM
Such a hot chapter! I’m loving this story. It is really explaining and bringing the pup mind set to me. I’m getting more and more curious about pup play. Please keep on writing it!
nycboot
7/12/18, 5:08 PM
It's a wonderful stand-alone story. Thank you!
7/12/18, 3:46 PM
@Max the four people referred to are the actors in the show. A show we don't see but was by note sexual. I'm glad you liked the story though. Errors and all. @MalSkin thanks. Glad you liked. I can totally see them going to a clothing shop. Though right now keeping missionary clothing is useful. @Third comment. I know what you mean though in this story I'm not sure where the section cutoffs would be.
Anonymous
7/12/18, 3:36 PM
@Max... 4 including the waiter
AgainstMyWill
7/12/18, 3:22 PM
Hahaha, i love how there are 6 comments on chapter 1 and zero on chapter 2 so far. ;-P I've never set up a patreon because money isn't the issue, it's time. Writing long-form stuff like this takes a big block of dedicated time and I just don't often have that these days. Fun to do every once in a while. Commenters 2 and 3 - I wrote that Bodywork one not too long ago too! Who knows, maybe I'll be inspired more. I should learn to write punchier shorter stories, perhaps. :)
Anonymous
7/12/18, 3:16 PM
So Hooooooot!
Anonymous
7/12/18, 2:10 PM
i thought it was a good story, very sexy, great hypnosis, and like everyone i have only one opinion. i like it when stories are broken down into parts and have ability to read some, then wait for the next part. or have many parts but can read one. digest it, then read another when have time. still, i am sure others will disagree and want the all or nothing posti
AeonFlux
7/12/18, 2:08 PM
Next chapter please ....... let us all know the downfall of the elders
MalSkin
7/12/18, 8:26 AM
I always like these types of stores thanks for writing would have been interesting if they had called into a suitable shop for a change of clothing