Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/12/18, 3:36 PM
@Max... 4 including the waiter
AgainstMyWill
7/12/18, 3:22 PM
Hahaha, i love how there are 6 comments on chapter 1 and zero on chapter 2 so far. ;-P I've never set up a patreon because money isn't the issue, it's time. Writing long-form stuff like this takes a big block of dedicated time and I just don't often have that these days. Fun to do every once in a while. Commenters 2 and 3 - I wrote that Bodywork one not too long ago too! Who knows, maybe I'll be inspired more. I should learn to write punchier shorter stories, perhaps. :)
Anonymous
7/12/18, 3:16 PM
So Hooooooot!
Anonymous
7/12/18, 2:10 PM
i thought it was a good story, very sexy, great hypnosis, and like everyone i have only one opinion. i like it when stories are broken down into parts and have ability to read some, then wait for the next part. or have many parts but can read one. digest it, then read another when have time. still, i am sure others will disagree and want the all or nothing posti
AeonFlux
7/12/18, 2:08 PM
Next chapter please ....... let us all know the downfall of the elders
MalSkin
7/12/18, 8:26 AM
I always like these types of stores thanks for writing would have been interesting if they had called into a suitable shop for a change of clothing
Anonymous
7/12/18, 8:16 AM
So fucking hot. Love seeing an update from you Will. +1 for having a patreon.
Max
7/12/18, 6:56 AM
So it's a great story but there are a lot of points in there with wrong spelling, and there was a sentence where they said it's amazing what you can do with 4 people, where is number 4?i only counted 3 people
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
7/12/18, 5:19 AM
Wow! So hot to be changed into such a pervert!!
Martin
7/12/18, 4:59 AM
drgnawbones, please let me know what troubles you have with the editing. You can write me at martin@gayspiralstories.com or in the forum. One advice: As an author it's a very good idea to create an account and make sure that you're logged on when submitting a story, otherwise you won't be able to see the ratings and access statistics for the story and it's much harder to edit it.